Ghost in the Headlights
Duga, L. (2021). Ghost in the Headlights. Scholastic Inc.
Brianna
Jenson has just moved in with her uncle Shale in rural Pennsylvania. Every
afternoon, when she walks home from school, as the sun begins to set, she can
hear footsteps behind her. Yet when she turns to look, there’s no one there.
Then a car races along the narrow country road, headlights blinding as it
almost runs her over, but there’s no one driving. As she digs into the past of
Shadowrun Road, she discovers a tragedy that was never resolved. Can Brianna
unravel this ghostly mystery before it’s too late?
A
disappointing and cliché start right off the bat, with the main character –
Brianna – being startled awake, forgetting where she is and then going into a
long explanation on why she’s there; this is just a cheap scare in movie
format. And the long explanation? The first rule of writing – always show,
don’t tell, otherwise, it’s just a boring information dump that could’ve been
spread throughout the story. I don’t understand why Brianna can’t stay with
friends either, my family took care of some kids whose mum was close with mine
for two months. Cheap reasoning to start the story.
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